Tuesday 31 August 2021

email to Harold

this is my email to Harold 

hi Harold I hope you made some good and tasty lock down loaf to have lunch

and how is Harold going? so see you in a bit 

2 comments:

  1. Hi Liam
    Great job writing to Harold. Don't forget to sign off at the end, e.g. From Liam, otherwise Harold won't know who wrote to him. What else could you write to Harold? Maybe you could tell him what you have been up to. Well done on posting your work to the blog Liam.
    Sarah

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  2. Hi Liam its me Lochy I love your blog.I think its cool but you might want to add some more to it. And ad some capitals and full stops thanks bye.

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