this is my email to Harold
hi Harold I hope you made some good and tasty lock down loaf to have lunch
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 5 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
this is my email to Harold
hi Harold I hope you made some good and tasty lock down loaf to have lunch
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Liam
ReplyDeleteGreat job writing to Harold. Don't forget to sign off at the end, e.g. From Liam, otherwise Harold won't know who wrote to him. What else could you write to Harold? Maybe you could tell him what you have been up to. Well done on posting your work to the blog Liam.
Sarah
Hi Liam its me Lochy I love your blog.I think its cool but you might want to add some more to it. And ad some capitals and full stops thanks bye.
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