Wednesday 25 August 2021

my quality blog post

 this is my quality blog post to Bryce

hi Bryce how are you that is relay good alliteration and riming

this reminds me of poetry and just to remind you you wrote i instead of I

1 comment:

  1. Hi Liam
    That is a very positive and thoughtful comment on Bryces' blog post. Next time make sure you double check your spelling and punctuation. Do you have a dictionary at home?
    Sarah

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