this is my quality blog post to Bryce
hi Bryce how are you that is relay good alliteration and riming
this reminds me of poetry and just to remind you you wrote i instead of I
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 5 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
this is my quality blog post to Bryce
hi Bryce how are you that is relay good alliteration and riming
this reminds me of poetry and just to remind you you wrote i instead of I
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Liam
ReplyDeleteThat is a very positive and thoughtful comment on Bryces' blog post. Next time make sure you double check your spelling and punctuation. Do you have a dictionary at home?
Sarah