Kaboom bang there was a big was the last prison on the enemy was dead baa the random sheep went
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 5 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 3 September 2021
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Hi Liam
ReplyDeleteI can see you have written some onomatopoeias...Kaboom, bang and Baa. Well done! Next time just read over your sentence to make sure it makes sense. You are doing a great job with your learning from home, ka pai Liam.
Sarah