Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 5 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 5 June 2020
Friday quick wright
Liam has a power and it is shape sifting into a massive cruzzy and be stronger.
There was a wuzzy invasion. Liam was going into battle. It was a massive battle. Liam was feeling like we would loose the battle. We were loosing but I had an idea. I called the fuzzy bombers to make the wuzzys go boom! So they did. Yay! The end.
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Liam, I really like your Spongebob blog because it has good punctuation.
ReplyDeletethank you Matias
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